How is it possible for you to sum up the story of our lives in such a short and simple poem...? "Walked away". Every single day (even now I'm kicking myself)...
Short? Yes. To the point? Let's say this... A master smith in Japan folding the steel of a katana ten thousand times, curving the blade just perfectly, and sharpening it to the point it could cut the fabric of the Universe Herself could not have made a finer point than this poem.
Wow! This is impressive. I agree, you've managed to sum up all our lives in this, who doesn't have these 'shoulds' on their lists? I do. This is fantastic!
How is it possible for you to sum up the story of our lives in such a short and simple poem...? "Walked away". Every single day (even now I'm kicking myself)...
Short? Yes. To the point? Let's say this... A master smith in Japan folding the steel of a katana ten thousand times, curving the blade just perfectly, and sharpening it to the point it could cut the fabric of the Universe Herself could not have made a finer point than this poem.
I will always make you say Yes if I really wanted you to.
You can't hide your tears from me and you shouldn't have to
I will always walk beside you
I'll find a way to make you talk
You already have
You did that too
I never had things for you to listen to
I'm thinking this doesn't apply to me.
They are always open for you
Oh...and you have. ;D
In hine sight we can see clearly how things or how we should have been but during that time we were blinded to it. Your poem shows regret and growth which is rare for us men. She must of been special to bring this out in you. I think your poem is fantastic