The Black Cat that Ran Away

The Black Cat that Ran Away

A Story by Patrick Callaghan
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I was three years old when i dictated this story to my mum, who wrote it down for me. I had completely forgotten about it, until she found it in some old box. The titles also serves as a plot summary.

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Once upon a time, there was a black cat called Bo. The Bo cat ran away. He ran away because he didn't want to live at Mick's house. He wanted to find another place to live.  I liked the cat named Bo because he played with me, games like pretend biting and wrestle fights. He wanted to go into space, but he couldnt because he couldn't bash through the world. He decided to try and bash through. He walked to the end of the world and threw metal and wood at the world to try and break through. He finally broke through the world and he floated into space. The black cat was happy floating around in space.

 

The End.

© 2009 Patrick Callaghan


Author's Note

Patrick Callaghan
At the time it was written, i was living with my family in a rental house, and the owner of the hosue was called 'Mick'. Hence, the story is set in "Mick's House". My mum also may have helped me with puncuation. Im not sure if i knew commas existed at 3 years of age.
Oh, also, when i was young i thought the earth had a shell around it, to keep all the air inside. Thats what the black cat was trying to bash through.

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:] This is great. Seems you were destined to write from a very young age.

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I love it.

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Aww this is adorable.

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Cute story. Well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

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Isn't it amazing the way we think when we're young? haha

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