Witness

Imagine
the sun is setting
birds chirping
your hair rustling
your there looking
the sea slick
colours of every tint and hue
your spine chills
jaw drops
you see hands waving
not welcoming
distressed
in danger
blood boils
your heart pumps fast
adrenaline smacks you
you look, frantic
able to do nothing at all
the horizon is there
everyday the same sunset
in the rain you search too
never seems the same
was it even true...

Reviews

I love how the poem is separated into short lines. It makes the poem flow really well.

[Miss Carmine]

Wow, I honestly love it. The flow is unique in it's own way and really captures you with the writing style. I also love your completely realistic human response. You did a great job with this and I really love it. Great job.

~ Miss Carmine