I Hope That You Like It

I hope that you like it

My soul poured it onto the floor

Never asked my mind or heart

The mess was there in the first place

Whose job is it to clean up the messes

The heart just sits and stares

The mind doesn't know what's going on

The past becomes the future

Friends have disappeared

New allies emerge

Who is to trust

I hope that you like

The mess my soul left

For all to see

All to ponder

It's the truest work 

By someone I barely know

Reviews

[Nina H.]

Wow, that's deep. Really really like it. Keep writing.

[Pablo & Rookie]

thank you Ms. Nina I appreciate it.