THE MIRROR

EMOTION

WE ARE OLDER BUT NO WISER MY FRIEND....THE MIRROR TELLS A DIFERENT STORY EVERY DAY...BUT FEAR NOT BECAUSE THE KNIFE AWAITS THOSES THAT CHOOSE IT... AND CHOOSES IT I WILL......... MY EYES ARE THAT OF YESTERDAY.... THEY WILL KNOW YOUTH AGAIN.... AS I TOUCH MY SAGGING SKIN... THAT IS INTENT ON GOING SOUTH I WILL PUT A STOP TO IT.... AND MAKE HISTORY....MY SKIN WILL KNOW YOUTH AGAIN!!!!!THE PHOTO OF YESTERDAY CALLS EVERY DAY....I LOOK BUT CANNOT RECAPTURE THAT FACE....TO GAIN SOLICE IN MY PAIN I SEEK MY FRIEND...MY FREIND THAT LIVES IN THE FOREST....SUNSHINE.....MOONLIGHT....
STARS.....THE RAIN THAT FALLS ON MY FACE.... THE FACE OF A HAG...

Reviews

[purpleeye]

thank you for your cmments...

[Charisma Moonfairy]

Very beautifully and visually written. I think you are a very good writer and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in days to come.

[jesthepoet]

Time....the one thing that no one can escape! I feel this poem! Really liked it!

[Tally]

Good poem love the depth of feeling.

[Sierra,love]

this is very deep,
I, too am tormented of the aging process

very well writen

[Alexzan Marie]

Plastic surgery? I don't think this was meant to be humorous but it did vaguely seem that way. I like it but it would flow better in three- or four-line stanzas...if you are interested at all in the constructive aspect of criticism. I like the content though, it is well written.