Desert Rose: Part 8 The Dance

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The desert she walked with pride and wonder 

Thirst and hunger, never crossed her ever 

The fire in her soul lit up her trails 

In the darkness of the night sky, it illuminated her glow 

In this limitless search of the 'rose' 

She bared her heart to the desert Ghost..

Dry and parched were her feet 

Distorted imprints of the footsteps she left as she walked..

The sky above her head was at once blackened

Streaks of bright lights blinded her quaint eyes 

The heaven roared at her in chagrined tone

As if to say how much he cares.. 

Of disappointed lover it smirked with limitless thunders

Showered upon her some massive droplets 

Of adulterated divine 

Oh the desert never smelt so fragrant 

Sand beneath her feet was moist than ever

The trickles of purity swept past her lips 

Sweating her dry eyes with calm whisper 

Every bit of her the droplets touched 

Even the fire which set her soul at blaze 

On her two reckless feet she began to move 

With arms wide spread like wings of an Eagle 

She embraced this moment like a hawk 

In blissful care, she began to spin 

Oh Heaven set aside this plot to see her overwhelmed with joy 

Oh desert her lover so deep 

Even sketched unusual sightings 

one of which was an upside down rainbow...  

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[C.R.Turner]

Quenched her petals,
grasp no more
infeeling senses
hit the floor.

Running now
in open joy
through silver fields,
her promised boy.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful place you took me in the words.
"On her two reckless feet she began to move
With arms wide spread like wings of an Eagle
She embraced this moment like a hawk
In blissful care, she began to spin "
Good to fall into the desert and know peace. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Rocans]

You write with an articulate elegance that I thoroughly enjoy. This is a quality poem. Well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the heavens jealous of her love for the desert...showing it with an upside down rainbow...

lovely...she is a free spirit, guess heaven will just have to get used to it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow… this is such a blissful read, I see someone being as one with nature, the most purest relationship you can have.