The end!

I closed that door

Never thought I would shut it up 

Like no man's business,

It is harder than taking the first breath, 

It seems impossible

Feels like the last of it it I would ever take.. 

Like something choking the throat

Hindering breathes that I ever took 

Love it was that I have ended 

Soaked in tears of the sickness so blue 

yet a feeling of relief 

from spite for something so inanimate 

Twisting and Wriggling of the head 

The heart shall no longer take. 

Of all the pain and feeling of helplessness 

This is just beginning of the end that has just happened..

 

Reviews

[Blood Ink Diary]

Sometimes we must shut doors full of phantoms of pain or ones that constrict our passage - your poem is penned from the depths of your heart - touch the knob of new door(s) in your journey ! Piercing poem - much savoured. Cheers, dear mate !

[00000000000000000000000..]

It will get better 1st thing you must see is you and only you, You cant drift in nights saying things it was my fault, You cry and many cry,but the tears don't give anything but emotion, Believe in your self always fore the other doesn't cry of give. Yes it takes time:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we just stay in relationships we know are bad for us...we can't let go...and when we finally make the break...there is relief and we wonder why we put up with the unhappiness for so long.

nice piece.

[Sami Khalil]

We close doors for security reasons, to keep predators out, to lock our insecurities in and so forth. I like the analogy with the heart and all that related to shutting doors...Excellent...:)................