His unfortunate fate!

You say that you love me
But do you really do?
You know that I know you've let me down again
Even then, why do you beg for excuses;
What makes you think I will believe you again?
You cause pain in me,
Knowing that it will hurt..
Why do you shadow your doings with lies,
When you know I will find out!
Why that vain attitude?
When you know you will crumble to bits if I leave.,
Why don't you have realisation of how it feels?
I have tried and tried so hard.,
But now nothing can set sail this broken heart..,
A decision is soon to be made-
About my mysterious destiny and your unfortunate fate!

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

Someone once told me that you can't legislate mental health....nor can you make another person see and feel what you would like them to. Perhaps that is the unfortunate fate awaiting him.

[PP]

Thanks Roger much appreciate what you have said :)

[Basu Gupta]

nice piece..projected everything you wanted to..
'shadow with lies' loved this line..
Thanks for sharing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nicely expressed angst with a steely determination to survive.

[PP]

Guess that is what it is John, thanks :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like the strength of the speaker, especially shown in the last lines of the poem...

I set sail and you will be the one to suffer, heaven knows you have done it enough to me.

[PP]

Ho well do you read my mind Jacob..that is what I want to shout out loud :) Thanks

[Lucia]

I really liked this. Very beautiful and powerful and true. Good job, seems like you are writing from experience.

Mind reviewing some of my writing?

[PP]

Thanks Hun, sure will read through your work if not tonight tomorrow :)

[David Scott]

I think the decision is made...
Now the resolve to take action will be the catalyst for "setting the heart to sail"...
Maybe it is not about "him" anymore. Just maybe.
This poem feels like a broken heart. Truly it does.
I pray your heart finds her new wind soon.

[PP]

You think so David, it is so easy to decide where I fail always is the action bit! But I hope this time the mind takes over the body:) thank you for your support :)

[Sami Khalil]

I'm so glad you are coming to realizations and you are taking destiny by the horns. I like the idea of sailing a broken heart...Bravo................

[PP]

Thanks Sami! I wish I could slap these words on one man's face ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)................