Live in the dream..

Koi humein lafzoon se khush karen,

Uski zarurat nahi,

Lafz chup ho jati hain,

Unki bewafai humein manzoor nahi. 

Khamoshi aisi ho do dillon ke darmeyia,

Ke awaz ki koi gungayish hi na ho..

Waqt ruk jaye dheeme se, 

Aur saanso ki aahat jhuki si ho..

Aisa ek lamha bus sapna hi sahi,

Humein sapnee mein hi rehne do..

My very first attempt of writing in Hindi!! I will translate the essence in English for you guys, it may not sound as poetic but I will give it a go :) 

Words don't please me 

I need no word 

Words fade away and die out 

I desire not their unfaithful affair..

I deem for the silence between two hearts 

Where voices disappear..

Time ceases to roll gently 

And every breath sighs shyly 

This moment better be a dream 

Let me live in the dream.. 

Author's Note

I have never attempted to write in Hindi, but for those who know about the poetic nature of this language will understand. I have managed to do a rough translation, hope you all like it too :)

Reviews

[A. Amos]

I think you wrote first in Hindi and than translated in english..... Good read

[Eternal Poet]

Even though translations are tough-it was still beautiful!

[PP]

Thank you :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The English version is probably not so poetic but the sentiments in it certainly are. The idea that words do not mean as much as the feeling of being together as one is very romantic.

[Pete Langley]

You`ve written of the core of love here, Prathama....and reading - without understanding - the Hindi first left me with the impression of the calm and peace at the heart of the quiet closeness when words aren`t needed. Much enjoyed. P.

[Neville]

Make me want to learn Hindi too... lovely Prathama, lovely... N

[PP]

Haha!!! Surely I am not the best person to teach, when I speak in Hindi it sounds pretty out of place.. Lol! Imagine Hindi with a bit of Yorkshire touch lol.. Thank you kindly for your review :))

[Neville]

Even better & hey, the pleasure is all mine my friend. My wife is from Lancashire so she probably might not agree but as far as I am concerned, your words sound good in my head regardless of any accent or language..... N

[Anand Sehgal]

bahot khub...

Khamoshi aisi ho do dillon ke darmeyia,
Ke awaz ki koi gungayish hi na ho.. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful words, and wish i could read hindu..

jacob

[Sami Khalil]

Amazing how you weave those beautiful words to give totla impact on the senses...Bravo.................

[PP]

Thank you Sami, much pleased you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:).................

[Jack...]

This is beautiful and so very true in its feelings. Indeed, love needs no words for the dialogue between two heart says so very much without uttering a sound. Very nice my friend.

[PP]

Much appreciate your review Jack, thank you for reading and your beautiful words :)

[MAC]

it translates well....a very nice write :)

[PP]

Thank you kindly, never thought I could write something in a different language :)

[MAC]

that is so very cool...I've done the easy ones; Italian, French and Spanish. I say easy but it was still hard to do. I applaud your effort and your results :)

[PP]

Wow Italian, French and Spanish..that is tremendous..Are you multi-lingual then? Beauty of poetry eh?!

[MAC]

use to be ~L~ I am Italian and Spanish isn't too much from that. The French I learned to write only to impress a girl :) it didn't work