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When money overrides emotions 

Laws of attraction change 

Our worlds become slave to conditional attachments 

Love becomes mere fate 

We buy all that money could possibly buy 

and decorate our affectations 

We measure the love that is shared 

through constant observation 

There is no balance in the give and take equation 

Because greed overrides equilibrium 

Feelings often don't get a place 

In this derailed junction of society 

What people don't understand while crunching numbers in their heads is that; 

They are stupid monkey's 

Under the watchful eyes of  

may be a killer beast 

or guinea pigs of a mental scientist!   

Reviews

[Neville]

Yeah, write on Prathama, write on.

All Good Things my new Friend,

N

[MrKnowAll]

Sometimes people do that and it's like evolving state and religious , they don't work together, and shouldn't.

[PP]

Guess you are right! But it's annoying :(

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was straight up hard hitting and I could not agree with you more... we can blame society as to why money rules many people's hearts... all that leads to is an empty soul.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You push the issue in this write...just as you titled the verse...I would like to point out certain areas:

We buy all that money could possibly buy
We measure the love that is shared
through constant observation
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here you seem to want to use the same effectiveness:

What people don't understand while crunching numbers in their heads is that;
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What we don't understand
while crunching numbers in their heads is that;

just seems like a long sentence of thought...you separated your other lines...this has a lot of anger and yet a conviction...to respond...

[shallimarRose]

True story... Yes I think in society there is too much focus on material things..
a line in one of my poems reads "oh to go back to the simple one bedroom days of love. The days before the crown molding and waterfall'd pool" You have written a timely piece and the last line is great..
thank you , shallimarRose