Desert Rose: Part 4

The storm!

Sinking into the depth 

of one's own melancholy and thoughts 

She was hoovering memories 

from distant and near 

Face to face with quaint appearances 

of Life's mystical mane 

She came face to face with Her Own Self 

In silence 

She spoke 

So many words 

With various meanings 

She picked herself up 

Signed a contractual agreement 

To shine up to glory 

against all odds 

In the Desert she rose again 

Gripping her feet tight on lose sand 

amidst a desert storm..

Barren are her thoughts

Lit up frantically 

dim enough to offer her a camouflage

But bright enough 

to set ablaze 

the piping hot desert air..

Mystery..thy name is she...

Who is she? 

What is her identity? 

There she goes 

looking for the desert rose!  

For other poems in this series please click here..

 

Author's Note

The next one in series..enjoy guys :)

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

I really love this series - I always feel stronger after reading one of your Desert Rose pieces.

In silence
She spoke
So many words
With various meanings

This stands out to me - very meaningful.

Who is she?
What is her identity

I have no doubt that she herself knows! Great write, Prathama!

[Pryde Foltz]

Signed a contractual agreement
To shine up to glory
against all odds

The indefatigable and creative spirit--your poem captures it brilliantly.

[PP]

Thank you Pryde for your lovely review :)

[Clockwork]

There is is among that internal and external storm and she has to face the most difficult task many of us will face...looking at our true selves and facing what we are. I liked her drive to overcome in this one (Signing the agreement to be better, no matter the odds). That is my favorite part of this one. Do I feel a Desert Rose: Part 5 in the making?

I've really liked this series from you. Some of your best works on WC I think :-)

[PP]

awwwwww, I am much pleased with this review, thank you Christian :) I guess Yes 5 has to happen..don't you think so! Endless energy needs an outlet.guess part 5 would be about lightening and thunder...thanks again :) Hope you're doing great btw..

[Clockwork]

You're welcome. Yes, I think that a part five is in order :-) I am doing well, thank you! And you?

[PP]

I am not too bad thank you, guess at this rate will end up with more than 5 LOL

[Clockwork]

I'm glad :-)

[PP]

thanks for the inspiration :)

[Clockwork]

Any time! :-)

[PP]

:):):):):):)