Dance

 

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

ISN'T THAT THE TRUTH IN THE LINES OF THIS ONE...AS A READER I WANTED TO DO MY BEST MOON WALK...HEHEHE...BUT YES IN LIFE YOU HAVE TO TAKE A LEAP OF FAITH AND JUST GO WITH THE FLOW OF THINGS...THIS GIVES US THAT FEEL AND THE LINES MAKE YOU REALIZE THE COUCH IS NOT THE PLACE TO BE...GO EXPLORE THE OUTSIDE WORLD...EVEN IF FOR A MOMENT THAT THE DANCE TAKES YOU IN 5 MINUTE INTERVALS...

[Rhiti Bose]

Nicely done, the rhythm in the poem is as good as dancing.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Shake it baby, shake it... life is too short to not enjoy the moment and do things your way... such a positive vibe you created with your poem.

[Androglossia]

The overall presentation is dramatic and beautiful. I liked it very much. It's true, life is a dancefloor. And in life, nobody really cares if you can't dance well. All that would really matter is your will to get up and dance. Great dancers are great because of their passion & courage. This is going to my faves.

[Blue Lotus]

a breath of fresh air....
very much enjoyed this poem and the positive message it gives.. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

A superb work of art along with song quality poem...Ever the talented with her excellent quill...:)

[PP]

OMG I am flattered..haha! Many many thanks my dear friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are most welcome...:)

[PP]

:):):):):):):)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...........

[quinfinn]

this is superb! i gotta share with you, the fact that i immediately thought of that Carly Simon tune "attitude dancing"...what a fun and wonderful poem this is! well penned!

[PP]

hahaha..it is indeed! Dancing is an expression of joy, in some cultures it is also performed as a funeral ritual..whatever it signifies it does signify life!! Thank you so much for your review Quin...it took ages to edit the picture than to write the lines:)

[quinfinn]

i like the expression that we, as humans are "spirits dancing in the flesh"...awesome write!

[PP]

that is class! Reminds me of Killers -Humans as well !

[quinfinn]

yes, we are multi faceted beings

[PP]

we are indeed..sometimes I feel I have had enough being a human being! Wish humans were a convertible species LOL

[quinfinn]

i wanna be a wolf....aaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

[PP]

hahaha....an eagle!

[quinfinn]

the wolf is my guardian and the eagle is my guide....in native nomenclature....i cling to those beliefs. it is in my photo array, if you care to look.