Dew Drops of Hope

In the whirlpool of 

Hope 

and Imagination's 

distant green eyes 

We hallucinate 

of all good things 

and imbibe plenty good vibes 

As it beings to mesmerize 

We fantasize rich vibrant colours 

And we smell some damn good flowers 

We feel as if 

The Sun is shining its morning glory 

On petals of violets; and 

Feathers of nightingales 

We touch and feel... 

The peace of dew drops' 

that each hope brings 

But what I hate to see 

Is the sight of the droplet falling off its leaf..

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

There is a lot of action going on with this one... the usage of the senses to bring this to life... the first few lines got my attention... carries you through the body... and the end:

But what I hate to see
Is the sight of the droplet falling off its leaf...

Adds the intent... end this quite well...

[Frieda P]

Ahhh hope springs eternal, you wrote it so elegantly Tink...

On petals of violets; and
Feathers of nightingales
We touch and feel...

That's a hope and a prayer right there, lovely.

[AYVID N]

The dew drop has a very ephemeral existence my friend. Till it's on the top of a leave, it could be taken for a diamond, reflecting all colors of the rainbow.l Once dropped it is just a bit of lowly moisture mingled in earth, bereft of all it's glory. Love and hope are like that too....

My compliments on saying it so beautifully!

[PP]

This review is beautiful darling :)x

[Pete Langley]

Like a Zen reflection. The individual drop losing its identity. I like this a lot. P.

[PP]

Thank you Pete, I like your addition of individual drop losing its identity to my thought! :) Its shows how important every individual is and that each hope has its identity :) Thank you for enlightening :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing description in your poem. You gave life and balance to the photo. I like the thoughts and the ending statement.
"But what I hate to see
Is the sight of the droplet falling off its leaf.."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PP]

Thank you Coyote for this lovely review :)

[Leslie Philibert]

a poem based on the classic subject for poetry, nice job

[PP]

Thank you Leslie, glad you liked this one :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hope is what keeps us the strength to keep going in tough times... I hate seeing the drop falling of the leaf too cause there is nothing worse then losing all hope.
Spectacular poem.

[PP]

Thank you Dale..wise words of wisdom from you again :)

[Clockwork]

I see the connection between peace in the natural world, represented by the water droplet, and how it affects the viewer. As long as the drop hangs where it is, the viewer is peaceful. There is possibility that the drop will stay there, or at least travel to a promising place. However, the fall of the drop thrown all of that into doubt and disorder. A nice little drop of insight here in this piece.

[PP]

Christian this is an amazing detailed interpretation of my thoughts, thank you for this review, its amazing :)

[B-poet]

Vivid imagery backed by profound diction at the same time. Great work. A riveting write and read. :)

[PP]

Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed this one :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice , descriptive poem with elegant imagery and lovely sad emotions in it done by a master quill...Thank you for sharing...:)

[PP]

Thank you Sami, this review is very kind in nature indeed :)