Desert Rose: Part 3

This one is called 'The Rising'...

Another night 

It's her pride 

In the desert she rose 

To a great good height..

One foot-step after another

miles to conquer 

There she goes again 

Unaware of what is waiting in the end..

Not even one gallant man 

ever known to desert tribes 

Have returned alive 

From the pastures where heaven confronts 

In orbital display over The land of the Unknown..

There they hold fortunes of every man, women and child 

In their circular stride the planets revolve

Whizzing up each one's life 

as they go along..

There she was with terrible anticipation 

Her future they behold 

of the coming to know..

She has to touch their soul..

Protect her own from being intertwined

with many others 

That live within..

The road to the revelation 

Is a game of no faint heart..

A struggle that can only be felt

It is an unseen battle..

Pain of dying men

Sorrows of centuries 

Treasures and luxuries 

She will walk past them all..

of all the consuming feelings 

she has to guard her own...

The ghost lights will bear 

The vision of her goal: 

Her task is to follow the ghost 

Let not a spec of thought touch past her imagination..

Or otherwise;

She will be forever trapped 

In somebody else's world..

Sucked into and carried away 

to somewhere no one knows of..

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Inspiration: Amrit Singh

To be continued...

  

Author's Note

This poem in the series has got its inspiration from the picture that a friend of mine has designed. I am thankful to him for having allowed me to use the image. He is an amazing photographer and artist..at Amrits Vision Photography.. Please check his websites if you like:

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"From the pastures where heaven confronts

In orbital display over The land of the Unknown..

There they hold fortunes of every men, women and child

In their circular stride the planets revolve

Whizzing up each one's life

as they go along.."
You are glorifying the art of poetry through great writes like these . Excellent...:)

[PP]

I am honoured Sami, thanks a tonne :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)

[PP]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Another epic read with such glory and magnificent mystery and myth intertwined. One typo:
There they hold fortunes of every men, women and child-
There they hold fortunes of every man, women and child

[PP]

Thank you John, much appreciated..Ooops didn't realise the 'man' thing :) Thank you again :)