Tranquilize!

Disclaimer: Doesn't resemble any creature living or dead and incidents that have occurred or may occur!!!!

Tranquilize me tonight 

Shoot it up my veins 

The veins are vile anyway 

They won't break down 

Silently collapse in a corner 

Sleep may come and take over

That is my runaway venture 

That is as far as I can get 

I hate the feeling that 

You are stealing my mind 

Messing with my thoughts 

And hate it when you say 

I am losing my mind 

Pressing too hard on my soul 

Soul wants to let it all go 

There is no scratching in the 

empty pages of hope this time 

It is loud and clear 

When I look into your eyes 

I can see that 

you want to tranquilize me 

Tranquilize my mind  

Shut me up 

Tranquilize my soul

'Cos baby I talk, and I talk too much 

I feel and I feel too much 

Suspicion is dragging me down 

I am stoned 

It is not the smoke 

It is the sniff of what you grow in your garden 

Tonight I want to get tranquilized 

Shoot it up my vein 

My veins need the vile 

I want to feel tranquilized 

Don't stop shoot it now 

I will patiently drift 

Won't keep coming back for more

I've got this feeling that 

it will happen tonight 

I will recite your name in the tranquility 

It is easy 

Tranquilize me tonight 

Shoot it up my veins 

They are vile anyway! 

Author's Note

Inspired by The Killers - Tranquilize

Reviews

[quinfinn]

here is something sick and twisted and begging to be ended. you paint a dark picture here which transcends the comfortable edges of life and takes on the pain of others, to disastrous proportions. what an awesome piece!

[PP]

Thank you Quinfinn..Much appreciate the review. It is the tale of silent pain in protagonist's heart..

[quinfinn]

very deep, well done

[PP]

many thanks ::)

[Jeff]

An incredibly dark piece. I got so much shame and hurt from the piece.

[PP]

Thank you for reviewing Jeff! In much pain is the protagonist.. I am great at writing dark verses just an attempt !

[Jeff]

You're welcome!

[PP]

Meant to say I am NOT great at dark verses:((( oops

[Jeff]

Haha! That's what I thought you meant.

[PP]

I am typing on my phone LOL!

[Jeff]

I don't even try to type on websites with my phone. It'll come like like I'm slightly illiterate or extremely drunk. Maybe both wrapped up in one.

[PP]

Hahaha!!! I am too lazy to charge my laptop but my eyes are getting stressed now :(

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Addictions of any kind can ruin your life because they will eventually grow to become more important then your loved ones... you spoke with a brutal truth but that is how it should be done.

[PP]

I can't agree more, addiction of any kind levels not just the addict in ruins but everyone around. Thank you for the review Dale:)

[Steven]

I saw sex and the shame of it all over the place in here. Nicely written. And I had to smile at that cartoon syringe.. lol

[PP]

Hi Steven thank you for the review! And the cartoon look how google image is losing quality!!! Lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, what John said...a sweet release...but sad, kind of an "anything is better than this" feeling.

but i also think of those situations portrayed in movies and books...where people keep someone in an institution who doesn't belong there, they keep drugging that person just enough to make him or her think there is no way out...

[PP]

True Jacob, insanity is a relative term! Very thin line between madness and genius LOL

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very well conveyed sense of longing to abandon reality in favour of some sweet release. The protagonist seems desperate to escape the current situation and just do anything to stop feeling the way she does.

[PP]

Thank you John, guess I have conveyed the message here... :)