Emblem of Insanity..

Don't know what made me write this!

If God and the Devil 

were to compete;

Walking down the ramp of fashion 

Adapting to feline motion 

The Devil would look sexier 

With bad boy moves 

And purr like a tiger 

grabbing the viewers attention 

to admiration 

Lots of Bare Bodies in Parade 

With bulging lust 

Animalistic instincts of pain and pleasure 

Will roll into the world of 

goodwill and faith 

everything everywhere 

from sex to orgasm 

Practised with the loudest 

of screams and noise 

An alternate society 

of prehistoric indulgence 

Hysteria of chaos 

Order of the day 

Life of sins 

Emblem of Insanity..

Author's Note

Been thinking twice before posting this one, don't know what made me write this! But he ho it is posted now!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe poor Devil lost his job. People are dancing on the edge and have no concern today. Many reasons to have little concern for the future? I like the description and the many strong statements in the poem.
"The Devil would look sexier
With bad boy moves
And purr like a tiger "
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[PP]

Thank you for this awesome review Coyote! Yes, I agree with you..too many reasons concerning the future indeed..:(

[Pete Langley]

It`s the impurity that is attractive, isn`t it? ........the acceptance that we are all flawed makes it easier to assuage guilt. Very thought provoking, Prathama. P.

[Nayan]

Seriously these lines have an extreme power of visualization. I fully agree with Coyote, that the Devil is winning all out. God is nowhere to be seen. Here God and Devil surely represent the people, righteous and evil. But true that the devil is more attractive, else the world would not have been walking that way!

[Jeff]

Great work. Excellent visuals!

[PP]

Thank you Jeff :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The ideals of what is right and what is wrong will be debated as long as life exists... a very compelling write... I love the kind that come to us when we don't know why.

[PP]

That is poetry eh? Thanks Dale :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The best kind :)

[csnfudsguno]

Loved this! xx

[PP]

Thank you :) x

[Brandon S. Whitten]

I want front row tickets:) Excellent read and write.

[PP]

haha..its free show Brandon! All you gotta do is secure your seat and get involved..

[Brandon S. Whitten]

:D Indeed

[PP]

:))

[Dream Weaver]

Pleasure and lust aren't a bad thing, it only becomes bad when sadistic people say it is so...God and the Devil IMO is the greatest story ever told..and the keyword being story.

[PP]

Its perception vs reality! Isn't it? One man's food is another man's poison!

[Dream Weaver]

It should all be common sense...but most of this world is lacking in it severely. ;)

[PP]

The common sense pot is empty! LOL

[Dream Weaver]

LOL it certainly is! ;)

[PP]

Haha..we unanimously agree on that!

[Dream Weaver]

Why yes we do... I've always heard great minds think alike and now I see why lol way too much!

[PP]

Same frequency!!

[Dream Weaver]

Just good Karma all around pun intended.. :))

[PP]

Haha Karma is my favourite topic and Nirvana is second on the list..but their interpretation could mean anything depending upon the frame of reference!

[Dream Weaver]

Good Karma Bad Karma...Karma Sutra... it's all Karma to me.

[PP]

haha...Karma Sutra indeed! Sutra means rule, very technical! So your adaptation is spot on Joe!

[Dream Weaver]

Why thank you my dear I do try :)

[PP]

lol! Ace!

[Dream Weaver]

;-)

[PP]

::)