Agony's Womb

This world is a place of sighs and massive huhs!

This world is a place for big sighs and massive huhs
I live in agony's womb
Left alone to weep like an unborn infant
I cry without noise and my mouth shut
There is very little space to stretch or relax
This place is a claustrophobic, painful and dark
I can't get out of agony's womb
Unless she gives me birth
It is the long labours she is scared off
But I want the pain to wear off
For once and for all
Atleast then I know it's over and gone
This long gestation in agony's womb
Is beyond the resistance of my pain
It's better that she lets me out soon
Before I rip open her guts and tear off her veins!

Reviews

[Male Stokes Jr]

I think you illustrated your point well... often times we wish to escape the place that does us the most harm... I definitely like the ending lines.

[PP]

Thank you for capturing the real intention of the poem :)

[Sami Khalil]

"But I want the pain to wear off
For once and for all
Atleast then I know it's over and gone
This long gestation in agony's womb
Is beyond the resistance of my pain ."
Wow. I really felt the pain and agony in this write ...A very good write...:)

[PP]

Thanks Sami, it just the frustration! But Someday, one day!!! As you say it..

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. I'm glad to be an inspiration ...That means the world... The train is on the way ...:)

[PP]

Will wait in the tunnel where it's dark and deep to be rescued! LOL

[Sami Khalil]

Keep waiting and hoping...:) Just kidding...:)

[PP]

Haha will do! :)