Little Love

Add a pinch of love..

I'm jealous when you think I'm fine 

I'm burning inside my heart and mind 

I don't know who to blame 

It's my nature, Baby 

Let's play the game..

I don't let loose 

Don't let go..

The efforts I've put is worth a lot..

Limitless passion, I've pulled it all..

From the fights of everyday life 

To the routine of our togetherness 

I want to break away 

And take you to the paradise..

Make me happy with just a 

hug, a kiss, few good words 

A day's laziness of clinging on to each other 

get inside me and stay there 

From dusk till dawn 

Breathe into me 

Speak only to me 

Think about no-one but me 

Show me the love 

And I will change the course of seven seas

and the world,

just for you..

Author's Note

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

Why does love have to be so complicated! Great write!

[PP]

Thank you Eileen for posing this question, gave me idea for another write :)

[Dream Weaver]

Okay...This one did it for me! I'm a big fan of rhyme and you nailed it
down with a mighty hammer! Nice stuff young lady!

[PP]

Thank you Thank you and more thank you!

[Dream Weaver]

You're welcome, you're welcome, you're welcome!

[PP]

hahaha

[Dream Weaver]

Now I'm delirious me thinks?

[PP]

Poetic Wine! LOL

[Jeff]

I can seriously relate to this one. Great job!

[PP]

At the receiving end I bet!! thank you Jeff :)

[Jeff]

Unfortunately you are correct. You're welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, this is more than just a pinch of love..

i love the line..."get inside me and stay there"---

bravo!

[PP]

Thank you Jacob :)

[jerrypat]

Oh yeah! Tell him what you're gonna do to/for him. Spell it out. Make it real. old nothing back. I really like this show you what I'm gonna do poem . . .

[PP]

Thank you Jerry for the encouragement ::)

[Frieda P]

Whoa you're possessive! Toxicate him, will ya?!!

[PP]

hahaha I am a Scorpio Woman! Its in my nature darling the sting :))

[Frieda P]

RAWR...no wonder I love you!!!

[PP]

haha...love you tooooooooo... x You are my Poison Poetess..!

[Dream Weaver]

That just might be it?

[Frieda P]

Just wanted to sandwich dream weaver, see how he can handle being between a Scorio and a Leo! ;-)

[PP]

He will be bitten and then eaten!!!!! HAHAHAHA

I am laughing out loud now..x

[Frieda P]

Lol, me too now...poor dream, doesn't stand a chance! hahaha

[Dream Weaver]

Good Lord and me being a Libra, I must adjust my scales ;)

[PP]

hahahaha..o my good lord! Frieda imagine this..you on one side and me on the other..shouting out words ! Being scaled and measured!!!!!!

[Dream Weaver]

Hmm? I'd be the luckiest man alive no? :))

[PP]

Bitten and Eaten! ALIVE!

[Frieda P]

ha you'd die a happy man hopefully! hahaha

[Dream Weaver]

Die a happy man? I'd be bubbling with elation and then probably
succumb to a stroke afterwards :P