Psychopath Creator

Life is
A pit full of s**t that
We all dive into hard and fast
Knowing full well
It is going to stink
Sting we all endure
From those parasitic bugs

Life is
A rock bottom abyss
Of sorrows and despair
We all fathom the woes
With tear drops from our eyes
Saline flood does no good
The exhaustion is immense
It's a battle never conquered

Life is
Some weird psychopath's fancy imagination
Grilling us humans
Tossing us high and low
Someone out there
Must be having a lot of fun
Watching us all
Either lost or stolen..
Either hurt or broken..

Tied up are our hands by fate so cruel
Locked up are our dreams in destiny's cupboard
With every anxious tomorrow
The drama carries on
At the will of the creator of course..
Shall our little worlds revolve!

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Oh yes!!! Life can be hell and many times is....
We all hope for a better world to come :)

love your style here :)

[PP]

Thank you ::) It is my straight talking tone..!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is what I call positive thinking... positive that life stinks... well the one thing is when you expect the worst you won't be disappointed in the bad things and you will appreciate the good things more.

[oasisscott]

Very good description of someone trapped in an existence they arrived at by circumstances out of their control. But life is what you make it and its when you have little you have most. It just takes people longer to have that revelation. Chin up! It's not all bad, we could be extinct like dinosaurs ,,,, ;-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have always had the opinion that we suffer our hell on earth ---afterward, the sting and the smell just have to go away.

this is amusing but also very full of real....

[PP]

Thank you Jacob for acknowledging the real!