Love or Lust?

Love or Lust?

Love without Lust is bland 

Like tasteless food on the plate 

Smoked Salmon without a dash of lemon 

Lust without Love is 

Like empty jar of chocolates 

Hollow desire 

Finger Licking Good 

 Momentary Satisfaction 

And may be sometimes-Damaged Reputation 

Love with Lust 

Is like freshly crushed pepper-con drizzle 

On honey glazed gammon 

One can never have an empty plate

It is eat as much as you like buffet..

Spice it up, Juice is up make the dishes your own 

You will always be satisfied 

You will look no-where 

but your own kitchen..

'Cos your cook is lush 

She serves up lust with love..

Author's Note

This poem was never meant to be about food and buffets..it took its on course!

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love how you serve this poem....like yiou say the food and buffets etc they do
express the views that provide imagery and reference points
And I agree with all....love+lust is the killer combo.

Superb writing :)

[PP]

Thank you..Soul Crusader! It is a name and a half in itself very catchy ! Thank you for passing by, will look forward to reading your stuff..

[Pete Langley]

A veritable feast of fulfilment, Prathama! You left my appetite sated and quite, quite looking forward to desert! Technically, I have a small, timid suggestion - this piece comes over to me as more a soliloquy than a poem formalised by versified stanzas.
Without changing any wordage, the line format might benefit from a continuous string of thought - which would have the effect of not interrupting the erotic undertone. I also think the use of capitals mid-phrase is probably superfluous.
I love the content of this poem, and hope my comments are helpful. P.

[PP]

Pete thank you so much, I guess your suggestion makes a lot of sense!! I was unsure myself as to how to structure this piece, but totally agree with you. To be honest with you I am only familiar with few poetry formats not a lot, I just write whatever comes along.. More often they are spur of the instant, get an idea, start typing and publishing!! I have so much more to learn from you I must admit!!

BTW was in London y'day.. And tell you what it was freezing! LOL

[Pete Langley]

Listen, sweetheart....there are NO bad formats! - only ones that work and ones that don`t, so you go your own sweet way!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh I so agree with you... why so many think you can not desire and cherish someone at the same time... that is why so many loves fizzle out, no flame to keep it heated.

[PP]

Absolutely Dale! Thank you for agreeing and for the review! I owe you a doughnut !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yummy :-p

[PP]

haha

[Holly Mason]

well an interesting course it is...like that it is not over adult rated and the content is very thoughtful as well as thought provoking very very nice
thank you for sharing

[PP]

Thank you so much Holly :)