Bumpy Boat Ride..

Row Row Row..

Going Upstream 

Is energy consuming!
Demands effort more than anything..

Patience is key..

No time to enjoy beauty..

Higher you go 

The tougher it gets 

Get someone on board 

Form a team 

'cos easier it gets..

Going Downstream 

Is almost effortless 

You will have plenty of time 

To Relax and Rejoice 

Reward yourself and the company 

With some Champagne and Strawberries  

See the beauty of river banks 

and spread the love 

Plant a hope..

But never miss the sight 

of the steering wheel 

Don't trust the river

'cos you never know..

There might be a bumpy ride ahead 

Fatal rocks and scary drops 

A path that your companion dreads 

And jumps off your boat before the bend..

Always be in control..

Row your own boat!!! 

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

Row row row your boat gently down the stream
merrliy merrily merrily merrily
life is but a ..OOF....ARGH......UGH........AHHHHHHHH

[PP]

Hahaha.. Hmmmmmmm!!!!!

[AYVID N]

A boat ride and life! So similar, it's scary!

"Always be in control..
Row your own boat" - Elegantly spoken wisdom.

This poem is as entertaining as it is wise! Thanks for sharing Prathama!

[PP]

Thank you Divya xx

[Frieda P]

Gently goes it down the stream with a little bit of Tink to motor your boat! Innovative & enjoyable, also do you have a license for this thing? ;-)

[PP]

What do you intend to refer to...Rowing or (W)Righting ? LOL

[Frieda P]

I thought they were the same ;-) ha

[PP]

haha..Clever! They all flow..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that downstream stuff...there are always "falls" to be careful of...when it seems all too easy, it probably is.

jacob

[PP]

Too good to be be true eh? Thank you Jacob!

[Holly Mason]

love this
row row row your own life choices truly good advice
thank you for sharing

[PP]

Thank you so much Holly :)