Ray Bans..

Money moves faster than you can think 

Today I am broke, may be tomorrow you will be 

Money is not the measure of my talent 

'Cos of its abundance in our planet 

Money is probably the easiest thing to earn 

Money is not what I am after..

Just enough is what I need

There are a lot of other things in life that I really care for. 

For you dying fans and those living in a celebrity trance 

You spill money for someone else's fake b***s, buttocks and tans  

Have overheard you calling people tramps 

you Judge them by their skirts and pants 

I have a message for you 

Brand names aren't reciprocation of a person's wealth 

Neither is haircut or manipulated lips 

Beauty is skin deep..and it is true 

But unfortunately you can't see 

'cos you got your Ray Bans on! 

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

love the content ...wouldn't it be nice to take their ray bans off and say Hi of course they will have to sanitize their God like selves...but hey it was only a Hi*) I have recently taken a burn victim out to lunch the looks this poor man received,the table next to us actually moved,The two tables around us that didn't move got a free lunch from me.It is amazing what people have to go through in this life...maybe your words will remove ray ban eyes*)thank you for sharing

[PP]

hahaha Holly guess you are right next time I will snatch their Ray Bans off their eyes and peek-a-boo!!! Thank you for reading and I totally appreciate your review and I am much moved with the free lunch that you gave him..not many people do nice things these days :)

[Holly Mason]

I pick up a lady this Friday who is also a burn victim she has not been out of her house in 6 years and I have no training but volunteering care is a no need degree it took me several weeks to talk her into this hope it goes well*)

[PP]

It surely will, that is a really lovely thing that you're doing Holly! And true we need no degree to be empathetic and charitable. Used to do a lot of things before when I was in Uni but I must admit I have not been doing a lot these days. I have always been involved in the Rotary Club since I were a kid..but I'll tell you what we probably don't need to do a lot just change out attitudes may be :)

[Holly Mason]

care just to care then write about it best write from wrong you will ever have*)

[PP]

well said :)

[Frieda P]

No having to read between the lines with this one, you hit square between the eyes! I take it you have something against Ray Bans hun? ha...I love the strong message in this read. Yes beauty is so much more than appearances and what money can buy. It's that old keeping up with the Jones's and wanting to outdo while never looking inside your own house for what really matters. Great one Tink!

[PP]

haha thing against Ray Ban, oh yeas indeed...too overpriced for their quality you see lol! Not paying some rediculous money for what is clearly some black plastic or fibre..! But nonetheless thank you so much for this very meaningful review Frieda.. x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this poem and strongly believe in its philosophy.

what you look like and wear does not make you the person you are...unless vanity is all you seek.

jacob

[PP]

thank you Jacob, can't agree more :)