Heaven's Gate

Love with ease 

Master the art 

Blend your instincts 

With passion from your heart 

A pinch of bliss 

restore it; inch by inch 

Smell a million fragrance 

Involve in the divine indulgence 

Empty your soul 

In the laps of love 

In eternity's cuddle 

Fire the immortal torch 

Say nothing, not a word 

Listen to the resonance of your art

all around 

Echoes coming back and forth 

of passion waves and their reflections

from the walls of your lovers heart

Feel the vibrations 

Feel the attraction 

Magnetize 

In a forever interlock 

Surrender effortlessly 

You are now pleasure's captive 

There is no turning back

you have found the heaven's gate..

Reviews

[KeeD]

Namaste, poetic paradise.. the pathway to heaven carved out by your words. Great write.

[B-poet]

Very creative, eloquent, and with a unique perspective for defining the credentials that are necessary for finding and make it through Heaven's Gate. Great write. :)

[CreativeStroke]

Beautiful imagery in this piece. I loved it!

[khalid]

very sweet to make love as superior as devine heaven. i liked the similarity. since love is not only the love between man and woman, love includes God's love, love to parents, kids, people, the good...then, nothing can be ever as superior as it..
i have really enjoyed reading this poem..
thank you for sharing..

[PP]

Thank you Khalid for taking this poem to a whole new level, I truly admire your concept of universal love; thank you again :)

[khalid]

you are always welcome..

[PP]

:)

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a fine poem , that impresses with imagery, like heaven`s gate, or the very strong imagery of the last lines, very good.

[PP]

Thank you Leslie:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i see this as making the most of love...feeling it, not steering it...same as with the muse...just feel it and write it...don't try to control it...

if we control our feelings of love, we never quite feel what we could.

[PP]

Absolutely, thank you Jacob :)

[critic h]

A very splendid art

[PP]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of releasing fear and falling into desire and passion. I like how you described a emotion of release and opening of new doors with gentleness and wisdom. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[PP]

Thank you Coyote :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

this flows with the essence of love and desire..quite remarkable

[PP]

Thank you Dr. Wood :)

[Frieda P]

This has captured my heart...flows right to bliss! Such lovely thoughts with gay abandon, such is love, yes, you nailed it. Smart cookie you are. No turning back, since I love it!

[PP]

Thank you darling..and yes there is NO turning back lol :)