Food for thought..5!

Food for thought..5!

A Poem by PP
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Sunrise to Sunset 
The Earth moves on 
For days, decades, centuries and millenniums
Have you moved on yet?? 

© 2014 PP


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Definitely a logical question most people are too afraid to answer. Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


dats luvly.. so much to do :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Food for thought indeed. Very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A logical question. When I was station in California I felt a earthquake. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


You should pose that question to Peter, Tink. :-)

Dashing artistry. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

There I see some poetic emergency!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You should also attend my Sarcasm for Dummies class. lol ;-P
PP

11 Years Ago

Do you do degree level courses then?!?!
moving on, going forward,and never looking back, great thought! i love it!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Aurora :-)
Salar Majak

11 Years Ago

you are most welcome :)
PP

11 Years Ago

:)
I can apply this poem directly to my thought about my current college situation It is very thought provoking for me because I have struggled to answer this question lately. Truth by told, I haven't moved on. Enough about me.

You posed the question in a skillful way. The opening lines remind the reader about the impermanence of life, but the opportunity of living and moving as well. Through your words, you ask the reader if they have taken up the gift of movement. I think that is a challenge for the reader to explore the world and see what is truly out there in the world.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Just close your eyes..ask the question to yourself again..In that vast space of darkness in front of.. read more
Clockwork

11 Years Ago

Thanks very much for the poem and your philosophies :-)
PP

11 Years Ago

haha..my pleasure as always :)
Beautiful... Loved the way you put forth the question

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Ambreen :)
:) never have I seen a question asked more beautifully.
Peers into one soul and still the answer vague as the soul still reflects on the magnificence of such a fragile yet wondrous question.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Kee beautiful questions invoke meaningful answers! Have you got a reply from your mind yet ?!
KeeD

11 Years Ago

I sure have :) thank you for such amazing poetry :)
PP

11 Years Ago

I am glad you do..and my pleasure :)
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I sometimes like to ask people, "What is the longest trip you ever took?" They tell me of journeys near and far but they are never aware that they have traveled billions of miles on their planet whirling trhough space, creating days and nights, seasons and centuries, in the grand journey we call life.
Yes, Princess, I have moved on.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you David, now this is what I call 'making a point'! Genius :-)

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