Advice!

Advice I can give

It will be for your own good 

And for the greater Best..

As long it doesn't affect me 

Advice is all you'll get. 

But if your actions have an impact; 

on my life and divert me from my path 

I will still give you advice 

I will show all the patience in the world, 

I will try to rectify your actions as if they are mine

I will deal with all the stress. 

I can feel your pain 

I will empathize and be your friend

I will do all it takes.. 

But if you mistake my patience to my weakness 

And if you think you can walk all over me..

Watch out..because;

One day my 'Advice' and 'Me'

Will be forever gone...

Is what you will seek with every particle of air you breathe..

p.s.....Mark my words-They are stronger than the oak! 

 

Reviews

[DrD]

Poetic warnings of human limitations. Very well done and I agree with each word.

[PP]

Thank you D..'poetic warnings of human limitations' perfect title for this poem! Why did I not think of it..?!?!