Procrastination..

Procrastination is the mother of all enemies
It just kills time;
If you rely on it-
You will be left behind.
It doesn't mean that you aren't able
But it indicates that;
You are hiding your light behind the rock.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i kept reading the last line as "you are hiding your light beneath the table"

because i so much liked the near rhyme effect of "time" and "behind" in the second and 4th lines..

wanted the finish to rhyme with "able" to keep the effect.

but a sweet short piece that is so true.

jacob

[PP]

Thanks, Jacob! That is a pretty good suggestion! Thank you:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I am with you on that... tomorrow is never a given so do what you want today before it is too late.

[Lucien Maier]

very nice.... I would write review about this.... but maybe later.... :D

Very Well Done!

[MrKnowAll]

Nah..I will procrastinate my comment :D

True words, I can't say much because it's so true and understandable.

Thanks for sharing , now I go back to do nothing :)

[Clockwork]

Yes, Jacob has a really good point about the rhyme. I think you have described procrastination quite well. I like the lesson you give us about the nature of it. You show us that habit prevents the full realization of our light and talent. I think that is more constructive and insightful than beating the typical lesson about laziness that many people turn to.

[PP]

Thank you Christian..Your review always glorifies my writings::)

[Clockwork]

You're welcome :-)