That is true, those sorts of occasions either send mixed signals or prolong us from getting to the point of emotions. And it has a bunch of classic patterns as you suggest with your final few lines.
It is quite hard to be on the receiving end of this type of thing. Although, it is pretty hard to be on the other side of the coin sometimes, especially when the focal point of the conversation is a relationship. I think some of it has to do with fear. We are afraid of engaging in candid conversations that could undress aspects of our souls.
At any rate, nice piece here, and nice job as always of identifying emotions and situations.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Christian, this review is better than my poem!! "Candid conversations that could undress a.. read moreThank you Christian, this review is better than my poem!! "Candid conversations that could undress aspects of our souls"- Words dance at your finger tips as you type away may be!! I am glad you enjoyed this one:::)))
Very to the point, yet very open to have others think of their own experiences. To you, this was about calling your bank. To me, it's when someone doesn't text back or doesn't answer a question directly. Well done :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you, so true we humans are impatient in nature and a little disarrangement gets us frustrated!.. read moreThank you, so true we humans are impatient in nature and a little disarrangement gets us frustrated! Glad you liked this one:)
Frustration ,
When will you leave me be?
When will you understand that -
you are the wrong within me.
It happens sometimes. Poem has straight forward meaning , leaving us to fill our own experiences with it. I guess it's something we can all relate too.
The best part about this poem is you, because it came out of emotion ( bank phone call )..and so it has 2 layers, the construct and the emotional part. Basically it's pretty easy to describe frustration ( few lines ) , and the emotional part which can be felt by the tone of the writing. There is more to say about this poem, but I wont prolong this review.
Well done as always :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Wow, never thought that way! Didn't think at all when I wrote this that it has 2 layers. I am gratef.. read moreWow, never thought that way! Didn't think at all when I wrote this that it has 2 layers. I am grateful to you for your review:) Glad you liked it:)
Very short but very precise and hitting. I dont know why they do it but they sure make me suffer!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
People take pleasure in getting others frustrated, don't they??
11 Years Ago
They sure do. I stand victimised every moment by such ones ;)
11 Years Ago
Let's kick their asses and just stay calm! haha :)
11 Years Ago
I try and somehow always manage to fail :(
Maybe I need lessons. Please stay in touch!
11 Years Ago
I will girl, just need to take a deep breath, take position and kick some butts! Hey btw I lived in .. read moreI will girl, just need to take a deep breath, take position and kick some butts! Hey btw I lived in Vizag 2 years of my life. Its a beautiful place!
11 Years Ago
Wow! Prathama! So glad to have found you. So you lived in Vizag? I work there presently. Nice place.. read moreWow! Prathama! So glad to have found you. So you lived in Vizag? I work there presently. Nice place I agree. Great we have something in common!
I used to love going to Kailash Giri and the another hill top by the sea can't remember the name!!!!.. read moreI used to love going to Kailash Giri and the another hill top by the sea can't remember the name!!!! I am glad that I've found you too Divya! Cheers to WC!
11 Years Ago
Kailashgiri is beautiful. Especially the panoramic sea-view from the hilltop. So elated too Prathama.. read moreKailashgiri is beautiful. Especially the panoramic sea-view from the hilltop. So elated too Prathama! Indeed! It's cheers all the way to WC...such a great platform!
11 Years Ago
Indeed! I love that Titanic point at Kailah Giri, you know what I mean? Looking down upon the vast s.. read moreIndeed! I love that Titanic point at Kailah Giri, you know what I mean? Looking down upon the vast sea from top of the hill, awesome!
Read between the lines,
Cos I don't talk straight.
I might intrigue you/ confuse you/ cross you
I might love you/ appreciate you/ addict you
Depends on my mood of the day!
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