Frustration

Frustration

A Poem by PP
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This is how I feel after a phone call that I made to my bank this morning!

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Frustration 
When people beat around the bush 
Never get to the point
Pillar to Post
Here we go again! 

© 2014 PP


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That is true, those sorts of occasions either send mixed signals or prolong us from getting to the point of emotions. And it has a bunch of classic patterns as you suggest with your final few lines.

It is quite hard to be on the receiving end of this type of thing. Although, it is pretty hard to be on the other side of the coin sometimes, especially when the focal point of the conversation is a relationship. I think some of it has to do with fear. We are afraid of engaging in candid conversations that could undress aspects of our souls.

At any rate, nice piece here, and nice job as always of identifying emotions and situations.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you Christian, this review is better than my poem!! "Candid conversations that could undress a.. read more
Very to the point, yet very open to have others think of their own experiences. To you, this was about calling your bank. To me, it's when someone doesn't text back or doesn't answer a question directly. Well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thank you, so true we humans are impatient in nature and a little disarrangement gets us frustrated!.. read more
Frustration ,
When will you leave me be?
When will you understand that -
you are the wrong within me.

It happens sometimes. Poem has straight forward meaning , leaving us to fill our own experiences with it. I guess it's something we can all relate too.
The best part about this poem is you, because it came out of emotion ( bank phone call )..and so it has 2 layers, the construct and the emotional part. Basically it's pretty easy to describe frustration ( few lines ) , and the emotional part which can be felt by the tone of the writing. There is more to say about this poem, but I wont prolong this review.

Well done as always :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Wow, never thought that way! Didn't think at all when I wrote this that it has 2 layers. I am gratef.. read more
Very short but very precise and hitting. I dont know why they do it but they sure make me suffer!

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

I used to love going to Kailash Giri and the another hill top by the sea can't remember the name!!!!.. read more
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

Kailashgiri is beautiful. Especially the panoramic sea-view from the hilltop. So elated too Prathama.. read more
PP

11 Years Ago

Indeed! I love that Titanic point at Kailah Giri, you know what I mean? Looking down upon the vast s.. read more
Been there felt that many a times... at least you released your frustration constructively.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Hahahaha, thanks Dale for up-lifting my sinking spirit with your review:)))
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Well glad I could lift your spirit up. Didn't know I was that strong :)
PP

11 Years Ago

You are, you are!!

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