Magic!

Child's fantasy,
Lovers' imagination,
Everyone's longing,
of unrealistic interventions.
A shot of adrenaline
creates;
Chills down the spine,
Goosebumps all over,
Impatient anticipation
Conflicting apprehensions;
Of the unseen and unknown.
When that magician
Raises a glossy curtain
Waives his magic wand
To muddle with existing notions,
That's when the magic happens
In some far fantasy land
In a mystic corner.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and that corner is somewhere we often cannot get to ...

they remain unseen and unknown...

reality is always so different from fantasy..

i like the first several lines a lot

wondering if you want "lovers'"
to be plural..when the other two "child's" and
everyone's are singular.

but regardless, this is a catchy piece.

[PP]

Thank you Jacob for your very kind words :) I wanted to keep the lovers plural, but never noticed that rest of the elements were actually singular!! Thanks for noticing that, much appreciated :)

[AYVID N]

Magic happens when the curtains get lifted in a faraway corner of our mind! You brought it out superbly!

[PP]

Thank you Divya, the magic is about to happen!!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

i like it :)
fantasy is another world , another dimension , where all our dreams come true

[PP]

It is indeed Hadeel, glad you liked it:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

sure i did ^_^ you are good ..

[PP]

:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Clockwork]

I like how you identify the moment in which the magic happens. I also like how the lines before that hint at some of the reasons we wish for magic. I think you also captured what the sensation of waiting for that magic feels like.

[PP]

Thank you Christian, hope you've been touched by magic this morning!