Doubts

Doubts

A Poem by PP

Why do people doubt so much these days?
Girls doubt their men are eyeing on someone else, 
Guys doubt their women are flirting away. 
"I doubt I can do it!"
"I doubt this is possible!"
"I doubt I am good enough for the job!"
"I doubt my existence!" 
Have heard people say all these so often these days 
Me thinks 
They just doubt and never try! 

What is it with this weird state of doubt;
Why do people want to be..
Halfway between belief and dis-belief? 
Why doubt so much when everything is uncertain 
Doubt is something 
That is neither 'yes' nor 'no'
It lies somewhere in between 
When I have doubts in my mind 
I place that 'I' in between 
'YES' and 'NO' 
They meet half way 
And it so turns out to be a 'SIN'

When this whole world is resting upon 
Trust 
A doubt in the mind we don't need 
To be certain and less doubtful 
Is the key to being happy. 

© 2014 PP


Author's Note

PP
Thanks Ewa for giving me a title to write on! On the spot poetry lol :)

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Excellent observation. I have to admit I've been there and still am somedays. Great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Thanks Jeff :)
Jeff

11 Years Ago

You're welcome!
PP

11 Years Ago

:)
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JC
I feel your positivity, your frustration and wanting to help all those around you, with a bit of a dark side to you, a sinful creature that wants to know all things and experience all lives/living...

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

You're right there Jason, inquisitive mind you see lol!! Thanks for reviewing again:)
You are absolutely right here dear :)
everything is uncertain in this world..try to love others..
If you can't be good to anybody atleast try not be bad :)
your poem speak for itself..that's why I really like it..
You write directly from your heart that's why it connects with
different people..keep writing!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

you are always welcome dear :)
PP

11 Years Ago

:)
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

;)
the answer is easy because unfortunately , most people lie these days
its so rare to find honest , decent people , its rare !!
and good people get hurt so much for their honesty , this is why they turn to doubt a lot !! your poem its some how similar to mine which is in Arabic, in this idea..

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Hi Hadeel good to see you here and thank you for your kind words. Will look forward to reading your .. read more
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

11 Years Ago

you are so welcome :)
You gave out a helpful tip here, indeed doubt shouldn't be abused, and the thing you did there : "'YES' and 'NO'
They meet half way
And it so turns out to be a 'SIN'" - Really Cool!! so it enhanced the meaning of the poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


PP

11 Years Ago

Glad you noticed what I exactly wanted to communicate..Much appreciated and thank you again for your.. read more
MrKnowAll

11 Years Ago

My pleasure! :)
Well they say ignorance is bliss and it seems that people would rather believe the best in others than deal with the truth... it also seems these days that loyalty is nearly extinct. Finding the line between trusting and being a fool is razor sharp.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

11 Years Ago

You're right there Dale! Its an uncertain world we are living in at the moment. Thanks Dale :)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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