It's the waiting I can't stand!

Feels as if time has stopped
Because the clocks aren't moving.
I am so looking forward to that particular moment
To reveal itself
To let me know where I stand
That my heart has almost stopped beating.
Earth might have been busy today
Circling around the Sun
But my world has come to a momentary hault.
The ball is no longer in my court
But I can say that I have given it a jolly good kick
My very best shot!
I pray that on the other side, the receiver
Is empathetic and passionate
Pass the ball back to me and;
Break the anxiety walls
Of my mind which is not thinking at the moment
And a heart full of zillion emotions.
I don't like secrets
I don't cope well with suspense
Hit me with the news
Good or bad
I can handle the outcome
But it's the waiting I can't stand!

Author's Note

This one is a stress buster guys reflects a lot on my impatient personality. Reviews /Recommendations anything more than welcome!

Reviews

[Steven]

I enjoyed the theme :)

[PP]

Thank you Steven :)

[Ami Bovurd]

I hear you girl!!! hate to wait!!... LOL

[PP]

Thank you Ami :)

[Clockwork]

It has always fascinated me how time seems slower to us when we want something or when we don't want to be somewhere. I think that you show us that here with your poem in a very palpable way. We can feel how this burden of time affects you in these lines: "Earth might have been busy today/Circling around the Sun/But my world has come to a momentary hault."

Those lines are my favorite overall. I think that paint a pretty profound image :-)

[PP]

Thanks Christian for your kind words, this piece was truly an outburst of profound emotions. Glad you liked it :)

[MrKnowAll]

I can really relate to this poem. It happens to me once in a while, with things that really matter to me like friends and education..

I enjoyed it very much :)

[PP]

Thanks MrKnowAll or should I say Jack!!! At times I wish there was medication for impatience lol! Thanks for reading :)

[MrKnowAll]

No problem :) But who's jack ?

[PP]

Well one who knows everything!!! The Jack from Jack of all trades!

[MrKnowAll]

Oh..I had in mind that you thought I was someone you knew..So yes, you may refer to me as jack aswell.

[PP]

Haha

[Coyote Poetry]

I have no patience either. I want a plan and do it. Waiting is hard. Time seem to go on forever. I like the emotion and the desire of the poem. To know the outcome. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[PP]

Thank you Coyote and I am glad that I am not the only one who often finds waiting hard:)

[Frieda P]

'Hit me with the news' I can feel your impatience right in that line alone. Well done, I did get that feeling that 'waiting' is not your strong point throughout, I am not a very patient person either, I related to this as well. Nice read. :-)

[PP]

Thanks Frieda for your kind words. It has managed to keep me sane at this Patient O'Clock in time:)

[Frieda P]

;-)