When I am angry!

I've got a problem 

It's an issue 

It's what gives me sleepless nights 

It makes my days terribly restless

It's crazy when it's instigated 

All it needs it a reason good enough 

That works with logic 

A validity of facts 

It adores unbiased situations 

It cringes 

It makes me feel strange 

It's unstoppable 

Energy like I've never experienced 

Feed it with bullshit 

I'll punch your face with words

Fill it with nonsense 

I'll kick your filthy face 

It's no nonsense time 

You great big manufacturing defect

I'll make you question your useless existence 

I'll kick your a*s 

It's my anger

Don't arouse the beast

'cos it's tremendous 

My anger will churn you and your vanity 

and it will show you the place where you actually belong!!! 

Reviews

[fireblossom]

I'm not afraid of you - stupid cow...

Oops...see what you started?!

I'm glad you picked up a pen instead of a knife. ;-)

Another really good poem.

[PP]

hahaha you made me chuckle on this one, thank you for reading and appreciating!

[Frieda P]

You seem so sweet too.....POW!

[PP]

awwwwwww what can I say to this! Will have to carefully type comments from now on because Frieda is watching haha x

[Frieda P]

;-) always.....

[DrD]

Remind me never to get on your bad side, okay?

[PP]

hahaha, sure D!!!!!

[Grant P.]

What inspired you to write this? I find that when I get overly angry I end up laughing at myself later. I do feel that this definitely portrays what people feel during the quick moment of anger. Good job.

[PP]

It is was a Who rather than What that inspired me to write this Grant!!!! Lol say you said I've read through this poem again and guess what laughed out loud!!! Thank you for stopping by and would look forward to reading your work :)

[Clockwork]

Anger is truly a powerful force with the capacity to do the things you show us here. I think it is good that you showed what a person is capable of while angry. I think this makes us value peace and understanding all the more. In a way, I think it shows us the need to find our center and the point in our hearts where happiness grows. With happiness and balance there is creation. I liked this lesson from this poem; it spoke to me. Cheers!

[PP]

Thanks Cockwork, truly appreciate your point of view on anger. I put in constant efforts not to succumb to it but sometimes we all fall into the angry pit! Thank you for reviewing this piece :)

[Clockwork]

You're welcome :-)

[PP]

:)

[Frieda P]

C**k work?? lol

[Frieda P]

amazing what 1 letter can do...........

[Clockwork]

Oh typos....

[PP]

hahahaha Frieda LMFAO!!!!!! It was a mere typo (non-intentional) of course but it has made my day. Couldn't stop laughing when I saw your comment! Lady you are a legend..
Christian....oooooops :(

[Clockwork]

Haha, its ok. It happens ;-)

[PP]

:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

not so much between the lines here, just lines that come at you with ferocity---

i'll leave "it" alone, thank you very much.

[PP]

Hahhaha Jacob!!!! Think I've calmed down now that I've had a bottle of wine down my throat!