Stay alive In this vast perishable Universe..

Just one life 

Live it 

Love it 

Thrive with it

No two fingers are of the same size 

No two humans are build alike 

8 minutes past 11 O'clock in the night and 2 seconds

on 9th of December 2012

Is of no good to 

8 minutes past 11 O'clock in the night and 3 seconds 

on 9th of December 2012

Every second is just a different filling 

stuffed inside the pie of life. 

Some delicious 

Some horrendous

Eat it

Preserve it 

Smell it 

But never waste it. 

Life goes on 

Because we know how to live it 

Life moves on 

Like time and tide 

Toss and turn with it 

Explore, Observe, Learn and Educate. 

Struggle, Fight and push yourself

Only then you can make things happen. 

It is easy to get lost 

In this vast ocean of human beings 

Overcrowded with people trying to elbow you and rise 

By stepping on your dreams 

Making things hard for you, 

But remember Earth is just a minute little tiny spec in this vast Universe

Like a particle of dirt 

Me thinks the Sun looks down upon it everyday 

Because of its sheer size.

Dont be heartbroken if you're caught up in this rat race 

Consider them none but rats

Keep calm and move on

Just pat your back and be proud of who you are: 

Believe in yourself 

Because if you don't, nobody else will

Stay alive

In this vast perishable Universe! 

Reviews

[David Scott]

A very encouraging write. A call to be present in life and embrace the potential.
The write itself had a solid feel for the most part. The phylosophynwas consistent if a bit rambling, but the style morphed a bit.
A nice poetic expression.
:-)

[PP]

Thanks David, really appreciate your reviews. This was a 5 minute or less than that creation guess I agree with the rambling bit! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

enjoy each moment, but then let it go..new ones on the horizon hold store for us.

i really like this piece...and especially the "pie filling" part.

and yes, we must believe in ourselves...others will probably not...we can only count on ourselves to eat, drink and sleep life...because eventually there will just be a table for one, our own last sip of life..and that permanent sleep alone.

jacob

[PP]

Thank you Jacob for sharing your thoughts, 'that permanent sleep alone' is so damn true. Ultimate truth of life, eh?