Not in a mood!

I am not in a mood to write today 

I don't feel poetic at all

I don't feel alive 

Pathetic inner vibes 

I want to draw the blanket over my head 

I want to go to bed 

It is weird o'clock in the evening 

Sun is down 

I cant see the stars or the moon

Winter blues I guess 

I see not many colors around 

Black coats, Black hats, Black umbrellas 

It is incredibly dark all around. 

Please don't blame me 

Blame those weather Gods..

Now now 

You may think I am moaning 

And you are damn right 

'Cos I am! 

Come on Santa get on your sledge 

Get me some snow and get me some nice presents!!

Reviews

[JC]

I like how this starts as you not in a mood and ends with you writing something with such ease, kind of melancholy beauty.. i really like the weird o clock! one thing, did you mean sledge or sled?

[PP]

hahaha Jason, sledge or sled????? I meant just a carriage any carriage !!

[David Scott]

Ha. A fine little temper tantrum. Fun and clean write.
Solid poem!

[PP]

A moody outburst lol, thanks again David:)

[Frieda P]

'weird o'clock in the evening' is priceless, I'd give it kudos just for that line alone! entertaining read...

[PP]

Thank you Frieda, priceless wow I feel honored..You are really kind :)

[Frieda P]

Oh, I'm stealing that line from you by the way...haha 'what time is it?' ;-)

[PP]

It is Weird O' Clock indeed Frieda hahaha!! Guess I should copyright my new found moment!! lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is funny and witty... bring some playful nature to a bad mood... I know I feel like this sometimes too... everything is out of sorts and you feel like doing nothing.

[PP]

hahaha, Can't be asked mode!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I think it is ore a I wouldn't want to ask mode, LOL

I agree that the "It is weird o'clock in the evening" line is excellent.

[PP]

hahaha..well said. Glad you liked my creation of a new time!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"it is weird o'clock in the morning"

that is such good phrasing.

[PP]

thanks Jacob:)

[DrD]

Winter woes . . . . an inernational problem (except in places like Australia). Well put and highly expressive and an enjoyable read.

[PP]

Thank you D :) Always a pleasure to see you here, you've kind of refreshed my mood!