Love never disappears, it just diverts..

Love never disappears

It just diverts

In the journey

There are many crossroads and many potholes

Sometimes,

 lovers disconnect

They take their own course

They abide to their growing differences

The man decides to walk aside to catch a good view of the rainbow

The woman rushes to see if there is a pot of gold; at the end of the rainbow.

They get lost

Out of eachother's sight

Do their own thing

Follow their own instinct

They become solo singers in some crazy country pub

Sometimes they gather fans

Even enjoy few one night stands

But

In a crazy corner of their solo hearts

There is a space that is not their's

The love is still alive, and when they realise

They pack up and leave

They let their instinct guide their path

With a hope:

That they will meet again to restart a happy life

With a hope:

That their paths will cross again and everything will be fine..

Author's Note

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Reviews

[emmajoy]

Not sure if this is a pessimistic or optimistic post .. maybe it's how i'm feeling rather than how your wonderful words 'lay on the page'. We meet people, we say goodbye; surely the good and sweet times should be remembered and the dark shadows are what we might not want to learn but should. And maybe what we do take from the past leads to something special .. but then, it takes two to do that tango!

More people should read your writing, it deserves more than a quick scan, it always gets the mind working, this and other posts. Thank you.

[PP]

Thank you Emma for sharing your thoughts and it has definitely glorified my writing:) You always make me so happy because everytime you review you leave some right good admiration for my words and needless to say it inspires me more than ever! Thanks again :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Rare when two people will find the same path again. I had two different woman I tried a second time with. Didn't work. Age make us different. I did like the story in the poem. Good to meet people again. If the ending was a bad one. Always a opportunity for love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[PP]

Thanks Coyote for sharing your experience. It is hope that this world resting upon indeed. I am glad you liked this one:)

[Mia]

It’s a hopeful way to look at it but in practice it doesn’t really happen that way. It is a great write with lots of emotion, I can’t relate but I can appreciate it!

[PP]

Thank you Mia for your kind words :)

[Allan]

Wow, this is really deep, you have summed up some deep felt emotions. I've been through some separations lately and it touched some buttons for me. Good Poem.

[PP]

Thanks Allan, sorry to hear about your separation. Keep your head up and everything will be alright! :)

[David Scott]

If only... Maybe... If "love" was ever really theirs. The write was moderate for me and the concept felt a little bit like a desperate hope of realities denial. Still, over all, an enjoyable read.
Be well.

[PP]

Thanks David, much appreciated :)

[Damien Davison]

I really enjoyed this poem, It was wonderful. It was took me in to my own life, I connected. Gets you thinking, well, got me thinking about a lot heh. Thanks for sharing!

[PP]

I've got Damien thinking..my poem has surely done its job!!! Thanks for your kind words:)

[Damien Davison]

Hahah, keep it up! There's gold in those hills!

[PP]

haha..o yeas at the end of the rainbow!

[Damien Davison]

Trouble is being able to see the rainbow!

[PP]

True, definitely not in England lol!

[Damien Davison]

Oh I think you catch a glimpse! Keep chasing!

[PP]

Hahaha will do :)

[Zerth]

This is true to some degree. I love this but hate the Idea. I always hoped that me and my ex would someday get back together but like I always say It didn't work the first time It wouldn't work the second time it probaly won't work the third time. Good job

[PP]

Thanks Zerth, I totally agree with what you've said referring to your experience. In my poem I have ended it with a hope, because you never know when those two subjects in my poem meet they may not even recognize each other!!

[DrD]

That "space that is not theirs" lies within each of us I fear. You have captured the course of most relationships in their most fundamental nature and given us a capsualized glimpse of ourselves. I can only appreciate the experience as you give it and wonder how you learned of such things. A marvelous job.

[PP]

Thank you D for such kind words :) I am pleased you like it. Guess I have learnt a lot about life from my experiences and from what others have experienced, some from observation and some are just unstoppable thoughts of my own.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

well yes, the truth. Exes always keep a place in our heart...and sometimes...there is always that hope, maybe the timing was wrong, the circumstances...

there is that sooner or later you and that person are meant to be together...so that door stays open...

sort of like that Bread song "it don't matter to me" where they sing..."cause they'll always be an empty room, waiting for you, and open heart waiting for you"

really nice stuff here...

jacob

[PP]

Thanks Jacob, I will have to listen to that song :)

[Lover Of Words]

I love this!

[PP]

Thank you Kelsey :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome!