Love never disappears, it just diverts..

Love never disappears, it just diverts..

A Poem by PP

Love never disappears
It just diverts
In the journey
There are many crossroads and many potholes
Sometimes,
 lovers disconnect
They take their own course
They abide to their growing differences
The man decides to walk aside to catch a good view of the rainbow
The woman rushes to see if there is a pot of gold; at the end of the rainbow.
They get lost
Out of eachother's sight
Do their own thing
Follow their own instinct
They become solo singers in some crazy country pub
Sometimes they gather fans
Even enjoy few one night stands
But
In a crazy corner of their solo hearts
There is a space that is not their's
The love is still alive, and when they realise
They pack up and leave
They let their instinct guide their path
With a hope:
That they will meet again to restart a happy life
With a hope:
That their paths will cross again and everything will be fine..

© 2014 PP


Charlie
Fly the plane

Author's Note

PP
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Not sure if this is a pessimistic or optimistic post .. maybe it's how i'm feeling rather than how your wonderful words 'lay on the page'. We meet people, we say goodbye; surely the good and sweet times should be remembered and the dark shadows are what we might not want to learn but should. And maybe what we do take from the past leads to something special .. but then, it takes two to do that tango!

More people should read your writing, it deserves more than a quick scan, it always gets the mind working, this and other posts. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

12 Years Ago

Thank you Emma for sharing your thoughts and it has definitely glorified my writing:) You always mak.. read more



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i love the flavor of this piece, it is real and gritty, with all the pitfalls of a relationship but when two paths diverge is it always better that they re-emerge further down the road? it is usually not the case, and there is often good reason. most of the roads we travel in life, any of great distance, are never retraced for lack of interest or because of unhappy memories of the journey. this is a profound and resonant write, worthy of my faves list.

Posted 11 Years Ago


came back to this and was thinking...

the real pot of gold is their love...and they don't know that they are sitting on such a treasure...they are never satisfied.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I just love this and so many thanks to you for sharing this poem. So uplifted and elated I feel now. Living with that hope.

You are a very talented writer Prathama. A writer who writes from the soul. I am impressed. This of course goes into top favorites. Thanks again. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


AYVID N

11 Years Ago

Yes Prathama! Much better now. It was a bad day, but much better now! Thanks!
PP

11 Years Ago

I am pleased..you need a speed breaker with storms you see! Keeps it hooked to just one place lol
AYVID N

11 Years Ago

Lol! How I wish I could :)
This is so amazing!!!! I love how you compare love to everything and I absolutely love the idea that love never goes away, it just gets forgotten. This really got me thinking which is in and of itself a miraculous miracle. Thank you for this amazing piece of work!!!! I'd make you a cake if I didn't have a cat sitting on me.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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JC
a very good indepth look at relationships, you have captured it with a skill of observation that goes over so many so that they become deluded and angry..you see the beauty in all connections...

Posted 12 Years Ago


PP

12 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Jason much appreciated!' I owe you good few reviews and I promise I'll.. read more
JC

12 Years Ago

don't worry, take your time...I read to enjoy and thats what I've been doing
PP

12 Years Ago

Thank you :) have fun !!

In a crazy corner of their solo hearts

There is a space that is not their's

The love is still alive,
I love those lines...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

Yep . You are right. You are welcome...:)
PP

12 Years Ago

:)
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
This is a beguiling read, it's so true for so many of us...I've lived this at least. Lovers and life do this same dance....

My favorite line is...
'They become solo singers in some crazy country pub'

That summed it up for me...nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

12 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda for your lovely words:) I am ever so grateful to have you here!
Frieda P

12 Years Ago

welcome and back atcha! ;)
I like the message of the poem: love will be there ,always, reminds me of bravery stories that claim that as long as the fire is still burning , there is still a chance.
and you took this message and forged it into this short story line of two lovers that chose their own path, and there is this chance that they will meet again.

I can also relate it to myself, and it makes me think, and fills me up with hope.
Thank you!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

12 Years Ago

Thanks Mr Know All !!!! I am glad you could relate to this one. Guess your comparison of this piece .. read more
MrKnowAll

12 Years Ago

You are mostly welcome! I am always happy to review your poems. They have a lot of truth within them.. read more
PP

12 Years Ago

Thank you once again, I am truly inspired :)
Like the theme and how you addressed it. The last six lines brings it to nice conclusion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

12 Years Ago

Thank you Sir Jaykom :)
I think it's not the the roads you take, it's the final destination. Lovers can take two completely different paths and still find the destination is the same. Sometimes they need to go their own way before they can meet up again. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PP

12 Years Ago

Thanks Elizabeth on sharing your views and your words are very kind :)

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