The Laughs Will Fade

A young girl left alone yet again. She's surrounded by such joy, but she feels such isolation.

A golden glint shines, 

Sprinkled through the painted leaves

As a daughter weeps.

The air is blissful,

Gleeful songs on each corner.

A silent heartbreak.

Children are giggling

Parents' smiles filled with such pride.

Abandoned again.

Eventually,

The golden glint will vanish

and the laughs will fade.

See the bitter wind,

Ripping through the painted leaves? 

Their beauty destroyed.

Fathers turn their backs

And they never say farewell.

No matter your cries.

Mothers stop caring,

Their love grows for the bottle

And their beloved pills.

Her last love, toxic.

Screaming inside, her smile stays

She bids them adieu

Alone with her razor

Consumed with a fierce disgust

A mess, a mistake.

Lonely redefined,

Her deafening cries breaking.

Deserted, vacant.

Sweet isolation. 

Author's Note

What do you see happening? What do you interpret? What do you think of the dialogue? Where could improvements be made?