Faithful Hour

In my dying breath,

I sing out to you,

Grant me this my freedom,

All for you.

Grant me this oh Lord in my hour of need,

So that I may be faithful,

To you others I shall lead.

Author's Note

Some constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated!

Reviews

[Cherrie]

Faitful Hour has a strong title it tells of both follower and God

[EMF]

A wonderful a prayer as you';; find. Wonderful write. Loved every word, and needs no alteration nor review

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wonderful write here, enjoyed

[Dove]

This beautiful piece shows your faith and what faith is truly about. Very nice. Keep up the great work and stay faithful:)

[Penlady]

Speaks of deep faith and is truly what faith is all about. Lovely prayer.