Feathers

Feathers

We are like feathers set loose blown like the wind

 Flung hither and yon yet carrying on through

The currents of time and circumstance

The turbulence and unfathomable depths

Draw us toward unimaginable darkness.

Hold we must to the hope of an eternal light

Conveying beyond the dark a new direction,

Ensuring a new more positive trajectory

Dispelling the ever pervasive darkness while taking us

To a sweet illuminated eternity, to abide peacefully

Gliding on gentle breezes, from breath divine

Unfettered by storm or strife, a dreamy place

life is spent we are heaven sent homeward bound

Robby the Pencil Minstrel

 

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Hello Again Robby.. Another great write.. I loved this..
"Hold we must to the hope of an eternal light
Conveying beyond the dark a new direction,
Ensuring a new more positive trajectory" as well as the way it ended..
"life is spent we are heaven sent homeward bound" We knew you could write stories
You are really very good at writing poetry.. This piece is well written... We fear what we don't know, Darkness, Death, uncertain future.. In a way this brings peace knowing we have to look beyond and there is something grand at the end of the tunnel.... Thank you.. hugs, Rose

[Robby]

Hey there ShalimarRose, So good to read you and appreciate your review. I don't write too much anymore have gotten back into my drawing. I have never got that much feedback from my writes prose or otherwise so have not felt compelled to pursue it. I hope your new year rocks.

[Jade]

Dispelling the ever pervasive darkness while taking us
To a sweet illuminated eternity, to abide peacefully
Gliding on gentle breezes, from breath divine
Unfettered by storm or strife, a dreamy place
life is spent we are heaven sent homeward bound

I REALLY liked this part, this is so lovely, very well written

[Robby]

Thank you for your comment.