'Til The End

'Til The End

A Story by OxygenTanks

I've always cared for you, and you've always cared too.

But now there is nothing I can do, You took the easy way out.

You had no plans on trying, All these times, I knew you were lying.

You broke our promise and left me crying, I knew this would happen, without a doubt.


All of this happened not too long ago, all  the times we had fun, and the places we would go.

You had a big impact on my life if you didn't know. You're my favorite brother, and now you're gone.

I'm left here alone because you left, taken away from me, just like a theft.

I hope to see you soon, before my last breath. My hopes are that you'll come back, but don't take long.


I can remember all the times we hung out together, riding our bikes as kids, in whatever type weather.

Those days versus these days, those were way better. I've been waiting so long, so much for "A little while."

About five months have already gone past me, Every night that question. "Where is he?"

I always wonder how long you'll be. But it's okay, I'll wait as long as I can, it's worth a smile...

© 2012 OxygenTanks


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that was really good! seriously. it felt poetic in a sense even though it was a story. i really liked that. the emotion aswell was not overpowering, it was just enough. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You also write very well! :DD

Posted 12 Years Ago


OxygenTanks

12 Years Ago

Thank you!:)

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OxygenTanks
OxygenTanks

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