Fly little bird

Fly little bird

A Poem by ♥Dancing giraffe♥
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"It'd be just fine if we all could fly, it'd be okay if we all could fly away for a while."

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Fly little bird,

To a land far away,

So no harm can find you, in this world of decay.

Stretching your wings, so white and wide,

Flying over oceans of might and tides.

Fly little birdie,

To a land far away,

Soaring over mountains and fields of gray,

Reaching a place like shields of May

And whispering the pleasures of the dismay.

Fly little bird,

To a land so great,

Joy and wonders are like fate  

This land and sea are so passive

Its bliss and glee are big and massive.

So fly little bird,

With all your might,

Go off to the seas and go take flight

Find peace and pleasures beyond compare,

And run away from the despair

© 2009 ♥Dancing giraffe♥


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"This land and sea are so passive
Its bliss and glee are big and massive."

I absolutely loved the description in this poem! It was beautiful!! :) Thanks for sharing

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute and flows well together. I always admire when someone is able to rhyme (since i cant for the life of me). You did an awesome job. I like it =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


That is really good! I like the emotion used in it. Brings out the beauty in it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well written. I loved all the emotion that you had placed into this. It reminds me of letting life go and just beginning to go with the flow. You know?
But I really liked it, no questions asked.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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♥Dancing giraffe♥
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