Desensitising S**t

Frustrations and revelations of a relationship

Desensitising S**t

 

Sometimes I get s**t wrong,

And I can't quite get my s**t together.

I can do good s**t,

Which means we can have more s**t.

 

It's annoying when you give me s**t,

For s**t I should have done.

And I'm sorry I make you deal with my s**t,

Which makes you feel s**t.

 

I love that you teach me s**t,

Cause I feel like I'm worth s**t,

I like that you know s**t,

So you can teach me s**t.

And show me s**t.

 

But s**t most of all,

I like the s**t you say,

When people treat me like s**t,

That s**t makes my day.

 

So I'll finish off this s**t,

Cause I've written a lot of s**t

But always remember,

I think you are,

THE S**T!

Reviews

[richieb]

Owen, You make George Carlin proud! There is only one other word that rivals S**t and it also has four letters. I have just proved that I give a s**t! Richie B.

[Owen Aldin]

Cheers Richie! Thanks for reading!

[JustaManWithaPen]

Wow truly exquisite piece here great job!!

[Owen Aldin]

Glad you enjoyed it.

[SnowCat]

You can feel the emotion in this poem. The feeling of worthlessness but also feel the passion of wanting to feel good about anything. Mostly good about ones self. thank you for sharing

[Owen Aldin]

No problem, it was certainly a combination of that and trying to make use of how much I curse at times.

[747]

Haha, the way you wrote this is very relatable. I like it. I see you say this is of your frustrations and revelations, which stem from both positive and negative feelings... There's a humorous quality in this poem. Coupled with the frustrations faced, and your choice of expression, it makes this very REAL s**t.

Great piece, I think you did a really good job here.

[Owen Aldin]

Spot on to be honest. Trying to make sense of life. I spent of lot of time i a confused and conflicting state!

[747]

Yeah, thought that I might be. I think we've all been through our share... Keep on keepin' on.

[Lost & Lonely]

I love how this flows. and causes so many connections as you go. we all have S**T says and we need someone to help us handle our s**t. very good.

[Owen Aldin]

Thanks for the post! Glad you enjoyed reading!

[Cyndy Robinson]

S**t a basic fundamental in life. The only true expression a baby that is potty training can make. I think you have a point. Life is about S**T. Loved the ending. At least if you are going to be s**t, be THE S**T.

[Owen Aldin]

It's great to see that everyone has their own meaning to the poem and glad you enjoyed it.

[TheMalady]

O.O

It really feels as though you're venting your anger to someone through this poem. You achieved it. Hopefully, others will not be offended. However, I find your work fascinating and entertaining. Haha, Great piece!

[Owen Aldin]

I really enjoyed writing this one and I love the feedback from everyone so far! Isn't life bittersweet? Thank you :)

[TheMalady]

You're very welcome! True indeed, Life is so much fun - just play along with it. Haha Thanks for sharing this humorous piece. :)

[jesserose99]

I like it again Owen..it has your stamp. It's funny but says you give a ...'damn'..about someone special.

[Owen Aldin]

Thanks for the feedback, it feels good to write something a bit humorous once in a while!

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Nice s**t at your piece. S**t can be also useful at any kind of form. If we dont s**t out we can die. If we dont give s**t all world be at hell. S**t can learn us about others and about our self. One day we gona end up at s**t. My mum todlme when I was child I use to eat s**t . So now I know how s**t taste . Great poem yes we need more s**t like this. So thanks for your s**t.

[Owen Aldin]

I am glad you could relate to it!