Nerves

About a beautiful woman on a train

Nerves

 

She smiles,

With trusting eyes,

They speak out and dazzle me.

 

I hesitate,

Do I go?

What do I say?

Took long,

The moment’s gone.

 

But wait,

She glances again,

I open my mouth,

But nothing comes out.

Her eyes wonder,

And I am back at the beginning.

 

The chance is wasted,

I procrastinated,

It had to be then,

My courage is spent.

 

She curls up,

Gets comfortable,

Beauty is her ally,

It stays follows her path.

Her smile and lips,

Her shape and class.

 

Entranced by her aura,

She has no bad sides,

To speak with this beauty,

I had until the end of the ride.

 

My determination pushes me again,

To ask her name.

Scared of what might come out instead,

So gazing at her from a far is my choice,

Knowing I will never see her again.

So appreciating the view!

Reviews

[jesserose99]

This is so well expressed, and what you see in her is beautiful. You obviously look deeper then most and what an amazing talent that is.

[Owen Aldin]

Glad you see it that way! Thank you and glad you thought it was well expressed!

[Brittany Bostic]

I like that as much as this person wants to talk to her, I interpreted, that maybe he thinks he is not good enough for her or that something about him is not good enough. Very descriptive and easy to understand.

[Owen Aldin]

Thanks. Definitely about confidence and too much hesitation!