The Moon Shines Down

Nature

The moon shines down,
watching our steps
it gives us light,
in nights deep times
Waking us out
to join the stars
and shine forth still
The moon shines down
and give us calm

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems, What do you think about the poem?

Reviews

[Nightfeather]

A short poem it may be, but a powerful punch it sure packed. The way you describe the moon is also how I look at the moon. This poem carries a beauty that has made me fall in love with this poem.

Good job :D

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Ovi-Odiete,

Not so many grammar problems, here, Dear Lady. Just a powerful and peace-confering poem. A lovely write.

My best regards,

Rick

[Ovi-Odiete]

Thank you very much...

[Rick Puetter]

You are most welcome.

[Autumn Lyric]

I am always looking up towards the sky to see what the heavens unfold. This poem is brief but shows the power of the transient mystical nights that behold the moon and stars for our pleasure. I appreciate the work. Thank you!

[Ovi-Odiete]

Thank u very much dear poet....... I appreciate.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Very lovely thoughts, peaceful and soothing. You have a gift.

[Ovi-Odiete]

Awwwww!!!!! Thank you... I am amazed!!!