The Dangerous Seer~

Its short i know. But i came up with it while i was in a dark room.

From the little gap you peer

Your skin jumps as a spear goes inside

A tear will fall as you fear will grow

As you hear the close footsteps

You prepare your gear

Watchful from the rear

You write a short letter

Starting with a meaningful word dear

You will always think of yourself

As the dangerous seer

Reviews

[KeeD]

Pretty cool :) Short and simple but has a profound depth to it.

[Jordan's Back]

A very deep kinda eerie write. Excellent work

[Overrated-World]

Thank you :)))

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is short but deep, shows the fear that a lot of kids today live in. Nice work.

[Overrated-World]

Thank you :) x

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. :) I like it. ^_^

[Overrated-World]

For a short one. Means alot that you liked it :)