My Heart~

Written before i got changed, another rap.

My heart has it's own mind
When it first shined
It was alive until it got left behind
It's designed to rewind
And find the right guy

Not so that my heart can lie
Go buy, get high and go have a cry
But go fly then one day
Die strong with love
Like the drifting bird
Known as the white dove

I bet if you leave me
I'll hide my problems with a cigarette 
And pretend we never f*****g met

Even if you say you'll let me get wet
It just doesn't work out like that mate

As gambling does, you play
Win or not you end their day
Walking on the pathway
Head down or held high
You can say to yourself

I am strong, and i will die
Leaving a heart brokenly cry
Again i will go and find another
One which will kill to try

Leaving my soul to drift away
Leaving my heart to howl
Like a bright sun ray
That just got turned to grey
Creeping around mysteriously
You'll know I'm on the prowl

Reviews

[KeeD]

I liked this piece a lot.. probably for me one of your best so far :)
It's fierce, honest, intense.. and packed with a I had you, I need you, I don't need you, I'm free to be needed kinda vibe.. I love that.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

The first and last stanza really grabbed me, way to go with the verse!

[Overrated-World]

Thank you :)

[Jordan's Back]

Damn!! Wonderful Expressive write!!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Powerful emotion in this one. Beautifully written.

[Overrated-World]

Thank you :) x

[InsanityWriter]

Another good one. ;) Great job! Last stanza was my favorite. ^_^

[Overrated-World]

Thats great you liked it. Thank you.

[Lewis Davis-Norman]

This one is strong! Your raps and poems get better and better my friend, keep it up! :)

[Overrated-World]

Aw thank you so much. Makes me happy :)