Pleading

Tell me to go away, before it’s to late…

if not, I’ll adore You!

 

 

Smack me silly, so I get the point…

If not, I’ll long You!

Ask me to leave and never come back…

If not, I’ll need You!

 

 

Break my knees with a great whack…

If not, I’ll accept You

 

 

Show me the door, held open wide…

If not, I’ll cherish You!

 

 

Hit me blindsided, so… I ring inside…

If not, I’ll en-rapt You!

Kick me softly… then harder again…

If not, I’ll show You!

 

 

Punch me square on the brow…

If not, I’ll live You!

 

 

Twist my arms right into knots…

If not, I’ll breathe You!

 

 

Push me fast off this edge,

I beg of You please…

 

If not, I’ll love You!

 

 

Eternally

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Ouch, cowboy! (Dominatrix needed, Aisle 5, please!)
Original to say the least. You most assuredly use visual imagery to its fullest.
(I'm going to go now, crawl under a bush somewhere, and lick myself til I feel better. I suggest you do the same.)
(Oh, and it's breathe you, with an e. You take a breath, because you breathe.)