Partnered

Partnered

A Poem by Outdoors2

Authentic and real,
Rugged and tested
Tired and tattered,
this is the feel


Washed down and rubbed
Put in for the night
Can’t wait till tomorrow
As so, this is our life


Partnered for ever
Care comes from each
where ever we are
for you I search


Your eye’s show me soul

and temperament too
But when I’m alone
I am looking for you…

© 2008 Outdoors2


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"When I'm alone, I'm looking for you."

Nice. Written for Mrs. Right? I hope so.
Wishing you the best.
G.

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Your eye's show me soul
and temperament too
But when I'm alone
I am looking for you�"

I really like this write, this is just wonderful and full of feeling.


Posted 16 Years Ago


Now i Like this, written straight from the heart, very well written....Kim


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your eye's show me soul
and temperament too
But when I'm alone
I am looking for you�

Perfect lines...the longing and love flows are pretty evident.
Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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