Winter Doldrums

Winter Doldrums

A Poem by Outdoors2

It was there on the carouselle when it was ready to start
but the switchman had to leave and she jumped out of sight
I sat on my pony and waited till dark
I was all by my self only one in the park

She never came back and I thank as I sat
Wondering where I could find the golden ring at
She hadn't come round for a day and a half
as I sat on my pony still trying to laugh

I sit and I wait for the gears to engage
She's that ring on the hook I so wanted to hold
But the park has been closed now for a month and a day
So I just sit where I sat waiting for someone to play

~Outdoors2

© 2008 Outdoors2


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I sit and I wait for the gears to engage
She's that ring on the hook I so wanted to hold

I feel these lines. Great write...sentimental longing, making me a little melancholy. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on August 28, 2008