My Embers

You've come
and sat,
stirred my
 embers,
displacing
hollowed ashes

Exposing
smoldered
longing.
lost,
by cooled
emotion

Still warm
within
my
darkened core,
Sparkle
glowing flashes

Stoked
dynamics
rising up,
blazed
with fueled
devotion

 

~Outdoors2

For You Sweetheart xXx

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Nicely written. Slow passion...I like that. Good job.

[Chris Willits]

I like this poem. The title is what caught me, I thought it would very good and it is. It has some impact on the emotions as well or mine it did.