My Life

My Life

A Poem by Shugotenshi1692

In all of my life

There was much strife

Till you came

Then I wasn't lame

Anymore

Angels envy our amor

© 2009 Shugotenshi1692


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Short, sweet, and simple! Very lovely and heartfelt.

Posted 16 Years Ago
Its short sweet but forced rhyme, though its simple and heartwarming. A little extra would help, even one stanza

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on January 18, 2009

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I am 5'7.5'' tall. I have strawberry blond hair. I am into the goth and emo stuff. I am a solid, 100% poet. I do not like to write books or plays. Just pure poetry!!!!! more..

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